Just another Manic Monday

I promise there will be nothing about Tuesday Afternoon in tomorrow's blog. I just wandered on by here, because I'm actually going to be out and about today. So for all my IM friends who have been keeping me sane. I'm going insane today and will be back later.

I'm having no luck with Man Out of Time at all. My brain is not functioning on that level right now. (or much of any level actually) I'm really begging for feedback on the story to the people that are reading it. Please, please and please. I need the help right now to get me on track.

Basically I want to know how the characters are shaping up...if the story is paced well...that sort of thing. So please..I beg of you, help. Cos I'm sick of staring at a blank page.